I like the fat texture, and it develops with quite clear features that helps when trying to grasp what the piece "is all about". I do like the thinnner texture in the ending quite a lot as a "second theme" that breaks up the flow and creates duality, and/but I do agree Victor that the end is not the end here. Impressing work, thanks for sharing. Oeyvind 2008/10/26 Aaron Johnson : > > Victor, > > Thought it was quite imaginative and colorful, and my favorite part was the > ending and towards the end when it 'thinned out' a bit! > > -Aaron Krister Johnson > www.untwelve.org > www.akjmusic.com > > >> >> Hi everyone, >> >> I have put a new piece (or actually a sketch of one) up >> >> ouverture (or The >> Return of the Great Mincing Machine) >> >> to get some opinions before I actually play publicly it for the >> first time. Let me know what you think. >> >> Regards >> >> Victor Lazzarini >> Music Technology Laboratory >> Music Department >> National University of Ireland, Maynooth >> >> > >